It is a meeting of the minds. After evaluating my writing so far I examined why the Elders were having such issues with what I had written. It is important to know why a group of characters need to take over and tell the story there way. It was during this gathering that I realized I had not given enough information to develop the main character adequately.
Having brought clarity to the main character in a way that made since not only did it make the Elders happy but it took over 2, 000 words to do so.
TOTAL WORD COUNT: 10,070
Now if I could only figure out if that woman was a woman or an angel????????